DC commish Super V Doomsday

Well Here is my first ever submission to a major company, I was asked to submit something for DC comics by oneof their editiors who saw me at a con. Soooo here is the first one I sent. Hope you all like it, This is MY version of DoomsDay. I never drew superman before. Very hard to get his face. Tell me wha you think.....

Tripple spread layout 17x 33

Pencils, 2b,hb,h

Rod
This is part of my DC Submission, all rites DC comics